First animation attempt...

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Old 12 December 2004   #1
First animation attempt...

I just got A:M for Xmas, and this is my first (well ok, second) animation attempt (it is one of the tutorials.)

Comments/crits are welcomed!

Logan H. (This is the walk cycle from the front.) (This is the rabbit walking along a path using the above cycle)
Old 12 December 2004   #2
I still use A:M some too, its awesome. Good first animation!
Old 12 December 2004   #3
Thanks FireEyeC! Yea, A:M is a great piece of software!

Anyone else care to comment/crit?

Logan H.
Old 12 December 2004   #4
Well if your looking for CC then I would make sure no body parts go through other body parts for one , otherwise for your first its actually really good. Keep it up
Old 12 December 2004   #5
Yea, I realized after rendering it that the rabbit's hands did go through his legs....won't take too much to fix though...

Logan H.
Old 12 December 2004   #6
Thumbs up

WOW...awesome first attempt. I would HATE to show MY first attempt. It's locked in my pc somewhere with a 3-password protection.

Anyway, your second walk can use some more head rotations. Remember that everyone looks where they are going (supposedly), so as the rabbit turns, his head should turn in the direction first. Eyes first, followed by the head, and then rest of the body (which is next, torso or pelvis? Depends on the type of character).

And I think you know that the wrists need to be toned down. And try overlapping the may or may now work.

Good luck!

Old 12 December 2004   #7
Thanks Jeff! I will keep your suggestions in mind as I keep working on this animation...

Old 01 January 2006   #8
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