the landscape of (short video)

Become a member of the CGSociety

Connect, Share, and Learn with our Large Growing CG Art Community. It's Free!

THREAD CLOSED
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
  12 December 2004
the landscape of (short video)

hi there, i just found out about these forums recently.

i put together a short 3d video, and i'm curious to know what people think about. i'm pretty new to 3d stuff, but i'm pretty happy with the results so far.

i'll add details laters if people comment on it. but i'll say now that it's a love story.

so the video is available here:

http://www.defasten.com/_img/landsc/

or http://www.defasten.com/_img/landsc/landsc-m.mov (18MB)



cheers and happy holidays

rairai

www.defasten.com
 
  12 December 2004
I really like the style! Nice colors and the different DOF effects ar sweet . . . but I think it would look better if you improve the movements of the white character and make them more realistic...
 
  12 December 2004
Everything is very well done.
The only thing that isn't a 100% is the way the figure runs. He should stay a bit longer in the air after jumping

Good Job
 
  12 December 2004
I agree with the previous comments. You really should improve the animation, or find someone to animate for you, since you obviously are way better on the directing / compositing field !
 
  12 December 2004
Beautiful. I love the landscape style, your use of form and color. I agree with the others, the running man could use a little more work... his movement didn't look right, a little too jerky in some places, a little too mushy at other places. Just before he lept, his foot didn't quite seem locked to the ground.

But, more than anything, the story was intriguing enough to be well worth the watch.

Thanks.
__________________
-Paul
 
  12 December 2004
Nice design and compositing. Since the run cycle and jump are basically the only animation in the piece though, I'd make them good.
I assume thats a Philip Glass piece? It works very well with your images.
-hen
__________________
Skipped over when they were handing out business sense.
Wilkommen in Anomalina.com
 
  01 January 2005
thanks for the comments - you guys are all right about the character animation - basically, it just really sucks! heh. i'll perfect it asap.

i come from mostly a graphic design background, so i tried the emphasize the composition more than the character motion, but it makes the motion look horrible.

thanks
 
  01 January 2006
Thread automatically closed

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.
__________________
CGTalk Policy/Legalities
Note that as CGTalk Members, you agree to the terms and conditions of using this website.
 
Thread Closed share thread



Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
CGSociety
Society of Digital Artists
www.cgsociety.org

Powered by vBulletin
Copyright ©2000 - 2006,
Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Minimize Ads
Forum Jump
Miscellaneous

All times are GMT. The time now is 07:47 PM.


Powered by vBulletin
Copyright ©2000 - 2017, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.