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Old 12-20-2004, 11:28 PM   #1
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robobug (ostrich)


(the sound effect and music is not ready at the moment)
this is our work, mine and my brother's first trying 3d and real video mix
1 dv camera
2 hologen light
1 computer
and this is the result
http://www.limondesign.net/limon/images/ostrich.avi 3,6mb divx 3moment

i am waiting for your advaice

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Old 12-21-2004, 10:42 PM   #2
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hey its 3.6mb now

hey its 3.6mb now
 
Old 01-05-2005, 07:11 AM   #3
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hey levent, I like what you guys have done so far, but here are some of things I would change and or delete. First the pan in, to show the camera pointing out from a window should stop. I think you should just establish the shot from where it zooms out and let the bug flie in. Having the camera pull back while the fly fly's in kinda plays tricks to the viewers eyes. Second I would ditch the graphic of Garfield the Movie and replace it with your own, and last at the end the head rotates too slow, a bugs movements are quick and swift even in the head, which it looks like you were doing at the beginning when he lands.

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Old 01-10-2005, 11:06 PM   #4
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thank you rickman

this film is full action
people see what bug
but i tink any exaggeration
i tink you said to acknowledge to be right
 
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work is over





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3minute 14mb divx5 avi
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Old 01-11-2005, 12:54 AM   #6
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Interesting stuff (; some of the shots are a bit confusing as to what is going on or (and why, but thats not an issue it develops ) very cool stuff though perhaps submit it to iFilms and such? with al ittle intro possibly?
 
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thank you agentj
it was just a weekend fun we didn't have story, story board, time. we decided everything while we are shooting the movie. because of that the story was alittle bit weak, yes some are un understandable because we didn't do the sound fx. and without fx its really to understand this secenes.
 
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