Still image - baby grand at night

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Old 08 August 2002   #1
Still image - baby grand at night

This is a scene I have been working on a few days and wanted to get some feedback on what people thought, any suggestions or crits would be appreciated.

Old 08 August 2002   #2
Hey..good job. 2 things though. The vase seems to be artifacting...and the floor/wall tiles are too dull, I know it's night but there should be more spec. color and gloss.

Old 08 August 2002   #3
Thanks, I will see what I can do about floor/wall tiles as for the vase I planned it that way but maybe it's too much maybe I will tone it down abit.

Old 08 August 2002   #4
REALLY nice render! I like it a lot!
The only crit I have is the edge of the rug, it seems a little too straight, computer generated straight that is.
Seán Forsyth
Old 08 August 2002   #5
YAY getting there. . .

now. . . where is this light coming from? Yonder moon? If so, I would be incredibly surprised if the moon was ever that bright. plus I think the sky may be a tad too light.

Now you may be going for a stylized look, and if so, no prob, do what you want.

well. . . no matter what. . . do what you want.

But!, if you want to get real, then wait for a full moon, and see what the light coming through your bedroom (or whatever) window looks like. for all I know, it may look just like that. . . but something in me doesn't think so.

I think mainly it's the bright highlights on the window frames.

The rest of the interior lighting looks too flat, although I'm not sure yet how to remedy that. . . I think you may want to consider, if that moon is casting that bright of a light, through the windows, then the reflected light would only light up certain areas, above and around the directly cast light.

The rest of the floor would probably be pretty dark.

K, dunno what else. . . I know there's more, but I'll think of it later.

Again don't take any of this the wrong way, it's a great pic, these are just my ideas and opinions on how to improve it further.
A.K.A. Tumerboy
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Old 08 August 2002   #6
I like it, the bright light coming from outside, does not necessary has to be moon light, it could be a light post outside, who knows. the lighting inside is good too, since the room is being lit from inside and out.

Old 08 August 2002   #7
It could be a lightpost, but if that's the case, I would color the light a lot more. Most light posts around here are a cream or yellow color.
A.K.A. Tumerboy
A.K.A. The Dirt-Meister
Old 08 August 2002   #8
Hey folks, I understand the comments you made and can appreciate your suggestions but I think I will use my artistic licence, I like the way it looks now and probably will not make any more changes.

Old 08 August 2002   #9
Good deal, keep us posted on future endeavors.
A.K.A. Tumerboy
A.K.A. The Dirt-Meister
Old 01 January 2006   #10
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