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Old 11-08-2004, 12:08 AM   #1
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Anime Fantasy Girl WIP

hi, i've started this character 2 days ago, tell me what u think

the polycount is qiute high (3600) cause i made some folds with geometry and i wanted to make her hair without alpha maps =)














 
Old 11-08-2004, 02:01 AM   #2
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I like how the face is coming along, looks really good overall. Maybe it's just me, but the breasts seem to be a bit too low. Maybe move them up an inch or more and see how that looks?
 
Old 11-08-2004, 03:16 AM   #3
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I'd say that the arms are too short, or the legs are too long. One or the other. I'd probably shorten the legs slightly. Other than that it looks good. Look forward to the texture.
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Old 11-08-2004, 05:27 AM   #4
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Yo Kaito, your work is as impressive as always. You have great style in modeling characters with very anime look, especially about the face, don't worry about the proportions their fine can't wait to see you start the textures.. The only problem I have is that feet look off, and the breasts are a bit big, you may be able to actually enhance this characters look by sizing them down..

O-o then again, my critic could just be taste
 
Old 11-08-2004, 08:00 AM   #5
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Looking great! I really like the proportions (though the arms seem a little short) and the hair suits it very well. I think the eyes are a little too narrow and slanty for an anime character. It depends on what kinda character she is. Is she evil?
Also, how are you going to texture it? Celshading, simplified, or full on detail?
Keep it up - i like this one.

Damn... its giving me the itch to do another anime chick....
 
Old 11-08-2004, 09:57 AM   #6
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Nice start.
I agree that the legs are too long...
I like the hair.
Is she an evil character?
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Old 11-08-2004, 03:26 PM   #7
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oo i like the hair and face

pretty sweet =]

looking forward to the final version
 
Old 11-08-2004, 07:46 PM   #8
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Thanks for the crits guys, i'll make her legs a little shorter.

And nop, she isn't an evil character, do her eyes makes she look evil? i made several morph targets for facial anims so i can easily change them, actually, her eyes are 50% closed
 
Old 11-10-2004, 03:54 AM   #9
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Looking great! Can't wait to see the finished one.

But something's bothering me. I can't help but to think about this character. It's a resin kit, but I believe it's from a game by alicesoft (but I couldn't find the pic on the net).

Anyway great job! Nice to see more anime girls comin into the forum
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Old 11-15-2004, 05:23 AM   #10
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looking sweet so far, but i think the arms look a little short. keep it up!
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