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Old 08 August 2002   #1
Above & Beyond - Vehicle - Oct00

Here is my entry for this contest. This is my first contest and one of my first models. C&C welcome. Here are a few shots.

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Old 08 August 2002   #2
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Old 08 August 2002   #3
I like the detail on the engine, although i'm not sure on the spirals, on either side, what is their purpose?
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Old 08 August 2002   #4
Last one I promise. Sorry that they are so big but I did try to conpress them. It is still a W.I.P. but i am all out of sugestions. I really need some help!

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Old 08 August 2002   #5
The spirals pull in air and move the aircraft forward. Thanks for the quick reply.

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Old 08 August 2002   #6
Only Reply :annoyed: my other post which i deleated sunk to the third page. I need some Crit and suggestions. Common people. Please. Hwta do you think of the concept?

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Old 08 August 2002   #7
I like it but i think its a bit empty, you could try putting the balloon underneath the platform, and have two spirals at one end.
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Old 08 August 2002   #8
i like your idea of how that thing moves very much - very creative and unique!! U should try to think about its final look and give it a good overall shape. when u know where u are going u can add many details and/or necessary things like some seat for the pilot, some controls, a hanging ladder, the pilot himself... and so on!!
just dont give it up..

[edit] ah yes and i think the spirals are too big, maybe also try to put both of them on one side - as mentioned!

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Old 08 August 2002   #9
i agree with the others, it's a very unique idea

you should twist those spirals a bit btw (the individual pieces, like the "wings" of an airplane rotor), as they are they wouldn't move any air, they'd just rotate and nothing would happen =)
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Old 08 August 2002   #10
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Old 08 August 2002   #11
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Old 08 August 2002   #12
Sorry guys i didn't really get to read all of the posts. Thanks guys for the crit and suggestions. I ttryed to modify the roters but it didn't work. I dunno i might try later. Off to go to my sons basketball game.

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Old 08 August 2002   #13
Ok guys last update.
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Old 08 August 2002   #14
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Old 08 August 2002   #15
Last one. I am n expecting much crit because my model sucks compaired to alot of yours. this was my first compitition on cgtalk and i thought that i could learn alot form it but this will be my last.
I would like some C&C but i haven't really gotten much. Thankyou to the guys and gals who posted in this thread with encouraging posts.

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