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  10 October 2004
Female Head #4

Hi again, this is my four attemp to make a head, and the second for a woman. Its really hard so maybe some advices can help me to improve topology and anatomy.
The shape is a little rounded, because the reference woman is a little fat.
Now I look the head and I don't like at all, and I dont know why
(the ears are not done yet...)

last picture at 11/15/04


another updates at bottom

Last edited by plaguelord : 10 October 2004 at 06:05 PM.
 
  10 October 2004
Looks like a good start, my only cit would be the nose looks a lil big for a girl? unless she does have a really big one
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  10 October 2004
update


Last edited by plaguelord : 10 October 2004 at 07:39 PM.
 
  10 October 2004
Really good, especially the lips, but it looks like a dude not a girl, and where are the ears. On top of the lips there are alot of polys, that's gonna make it harder to animate. But it's still better than what i can do.
 
  10 October 2004
thanks ywn, all the ppl notice that, I'm missing something very important to make a female look, maybe the shape or the jaw? I don't know. I'll make the ears this weekend
 
  10 October 2004
the ear.. (is not attached yet)



Last edited by plaguelord : 10 October 2004 at 06:21 PM.
 
  10 October 2004
Tha jawbone (mandible) is too big - goes too far back. On the side view, it is roughly in the centre. That's where the ear attaches (ear hole just behind the bone of the jaw).

Angle of the ear looks odd - needs to be more vertical.
Top of the ear lines up to eyebrow, bottom of the ear to just below the nose.

Nostrils need work. So does upper lip - not that concave.
 
  10 October 2004
thank ruad, these are really good observations, I'll try to fix it. Can you put a picture with red lines to guide me better?
 
  10 October 2004
update...
the jaw line is still wrong, I'll try to fix it later..

edit:update on top

Last edited by plaguelord : 10 October 2004 at 06:04 PM.
 
  10 October 2004
Her features doesn't look feminine enough. Probably u need to do somemore changes to it. Would helps if u do more drawing from some anatomy pics, would definitely helps alot for modeling Keep it up!
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  10 October 2004
Here's my take at it:

1. Nostril area needs to be more rounded
2. More defined cheekbone, helps with the feminine look
3. Eye ridge needs to be pulled up and given a more forgiving ridge
4. Ear needs to be twisted so its only slightly tipped back
5. Lips need to be sized down a touch, the area above the lips has too much of valley from the side view. Resizing the lips will help, if not might need to pull it out a touch too.

 
  10 October 2004
thanks a lot for the time guys.

nitefyre, your tips are very good, this is my result with your 5 recomendations.


 
  10 October 2004
I would raise the cheek bone a bit. Maybe.
 
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