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  09 September 2004
Marthe2k3 - Animation Session 10 - Dialogue 1

Hi everybody,
This is my first post :-)
As I'm most of all an animator, I never took time enough to post a good picture.
Anyway, here is the 1st version of my animation (about 8 hrs of work).
Hope you'll enjoy and I'll wait your comments.
Cheers
http://silent.angel.free.fr/marthe2k3_WIP.mov
 
  09 September 2004
Marthe2k3 - Animation Session 10 - Dialogue 1 (WIP update)

Hi,
Here's my model (simple as required), and my update of the animation.
http://silent.angel.free.fr/marthe2k3_WIP.mov
Please leave feedback, all help is welcome ;-)



Cheers
 
  09 September 2004
Wink

good animation, good timing, nice job ...."chapeau bas"
 
  09 September 2004
Arrow

Nice animation for the time you spent ! Expressive !
Other ones in progress ??

Touf, always running after time...
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  09 September 2004
hi
it is a realy good start i like it. Maybe you could move his head a bit (rotate), thats me

Take care
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  09 September 2004
Hey,

I like it too...some of the poses didn't read too clearly for me...like around "touches me" but all in all...it's a great start. Good job
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  09 September 2004
Hi marthe2k3,

good start! I especially like the final pose, very frightening .

The part between 'the next... ...touches me' looks a bit strange, like a puppet on string.

Keep on going !
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  09 September 2004
Hi mates
Thanks to all for feedback.
The "puppet on the string style" ;-) is done on purpose. I didn't want it realistic at all...maybe a strange choice but that's mine ;-) I will see for that, this part seems strange to many people...
I will try to post another version tomorrow unfortunately, I'll be gone for 15 days :-( ****ing Holidays ;-)

Thanks again

Steph
 
  09 September 2004
Holidays? It's barely October, what country do you live in? Oh,..you're in France ; )
I'll take those holidays if you don't want them! We need more!

I like the 'puppet on a string' idea, I say go for it! And that crazy ending is great!
peace
-TT
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  10 October 2004
last update before 15 days....holidays power ;-)

Hi Again,

Here's my last update before a 15 days break...
http://silent.angel.free.fr/marthe2k3_WIP.mov

I'll try to work again on it a few days before the ending of the competiton but it will be very short :-(So please, let me know what you think about it, it will really help me ;-)

Rage On
Steph
 
  10 October 2004
Talking Yeah!

Yeah baby!
Nice job!!!
 
  10 October 2004
HI marthe2k3
looks good...if i could change something i would add some dynamics to the eyes. He is kinda sleepy . The next thing is when he says "the next..." his head and his finger are focused somewhere else. And maybe try to shift his weight when he makes a step

Thats me, take care im going holidays as well 10 days starting tomorow.
bye
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  10 October 2004
Hi!

A few minor crits.

Maybe adding some toe-movement when he takes the first steps?
I think the lipsync needs tweaking as well.

About his looks though, he's a really handsome bloke! I bet he gets all the girls !

(I'll probably have nightmares after staring at the last frame of your animation for too long!)

/3D Swede

Last edited by 3D Swede : 10 October 2004 at 06:06 AM.
 
  10 October 2004
Yeah Baby!!

Yeah Baby! Awesome!!
What a great design! (joke).
Very funny and comic animation.
Keep on working hard!
 
  10 October 2004
:-( I can't download for some reason.
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