PA Challenge - Character - Neox

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  02 February 2002
PA Challenge - Character - Neox

Ok here's mine

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Ok it's a little fast

The cloth isn't final, but it was the first time i used a plugin like simcloth, so please excuse that piece of crap

and excuse my bad english, too
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  02 February 2002
great job!
now i'm really considering of loosing this challenge
 
  02 February 2002
I like it man! I think you already know that though
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  02 February 2002

Ok here's another/newer Version, the body is too low detailed yet, but i will add some details tomorrow, have to consider how the design should look like, currently i have no idea for the Torso :(

ok now make me cry, and crit a lot
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  02 February 2002
Really nice job there! Ithink you coudl better intograte the eye glasses, maybe vary the shape just slightly? With the straps on the chestpad, I think perhaps there should be some shoulder pads or at least movable parts there. About the chest maybe just some puffy fabric would work, it is always a good idea for there to be some lower detail parts (Pascal's wisdom not mine) so it does not appear busy. The cloth however could have a patern of micro armor or something for structure? Hope it helps more than hurts,

See You,

Farley13
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  02 February 2002
Ah noch einer von der 3dmax.de Gemeinde.

Is this the FSK 16 version or why he had his arms in front of his....
I´m joking

Nice model, and absolute nice render will see more.

Christian
 
  02 February 2002
lol, didn't recognize that the arms are in front of his... ok there's nothing :P

The eyeglasses were a big problem, so i decided to put en flattened Hemisphere into the mask... the other things i tried, looked ugly :(

and thanx for the crits
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  02 February 2002
damn nice modelling you have there Neox.. good work!
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  02 February 2002
excellent model. the mask design gives a very "insect" quality that i think is interesting.
keep up the great work.
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  02 February 2002


Still adding some details to the torso, but now i'm tired and i decided to stop for today, he'll get some pockets and protectors tommorow

please crit a lot
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  02 February 2002
good look model, can you make a GI ernder with shadows, it can be great
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  02 February 2002
Great work. If I were to dig for something to crit (and I'm digging deep because you asked) I would say maybe that the part of his mask where his mouth is should maybe be more convex. Maybe some room for a chin. but then again...?

ps he frightens me so dont tell him I made that comment about his chin
 
  02 February 2002
you didn't say anything about his chin, a remodel of the mask can't make him angry

whoa whats that? the cloth from his mask is in his mask... outch... i will fix that
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  02 February 2002
amazing man...really detailed.....
 
  02 February 2002
As i promised, i remodelled the mask around his mouth, and now he can breathe

I also added a flashlight (rightshoulde) a Bag for a nightvisiongoggle, a protector for his belly (is that the right word??), and some other details like screws and clamps for the pipe from his forehead to his back

:edit: forgotten the image :edit:

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