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Old 09 September 2004   #1
Sunrise In Venice, Carlos Serrano (3D)



Title: Sunrise In Venice
Name: Carlos Serrano
Country: Espana
Software: 3ds max

Render inspired in Venice (Italy). Made with 3dstudio max 6 + vray + photoshop 7.
I hope you like. Please, comments and critics are wellcome.

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Old 09 September 2004   #2
Wow!!, very well done!
 
Old 09 September 2004   #3
god damn...

this is the fantastic! I like it!
Very good lighting and and.. and
CONGRAT!
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Old 09 September 2004   #4
It's a really nice work. I love the sunlight here.
But, I think you could improve the render. Add some more details and fix the bump on the ground near the camera.
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Old 09 September 2004   #5
It's very nice, love the mood. Two things. As mentioned, the bump map on the ground near the camera needs to be lowered, and the railing on the roof could show up better, maybe a little more anti-aliasing would do the trick.
 
Old 09 September 2004   #6
Wow, this is fantastic. A lot of the time when people do outdoor realistic scenes the lighting of the scene is a different colour to the background image, but you've matched it up nicely. The bummaping on those buildings is awesome, it doesn't look like a flat plane but rather a nice concrete wall with a lot of detail to it. Also I think you might wan't to turn down the bumpmap on the concrete under the railing just a fraction, it's a bit to strong. I love the water too. Good work!
 
Old 09 September 2004   #7
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nice work!
good lighting
can you show your WIP?
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Old 09 September 2004   #8
great work
only one thing i dont like..its the fog in the back of the ally ithink its too heavy to be along with this sky and sun light
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Old 09 September 2004   #9
Great work!

2 crits:

1) The street on the left corner of the screen could need a better texture.

2) The fog seems a little strange.

Other than that, it's awesome, really!
 
Old 09 September 2004   #10
Thanks to everybody for the critics and comments. I will take note of them.
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Old 09 September 2004   #11
Wonderful, i only miss the caustics from the lower level of the front side wall. It would give the image motion.
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Old 09 September 2004   #12
really awesome work!!I love it!

another minor point: I get the impression that I can see the ground behind the water in the foreground, (I dont know if this is just a my impression or you made it so) this looks a bit strange because:
1) in venice's canals, water is greenish and dirty so you cannot see the ground (your seems fresh clean water)
2) water level is much higher than that..

anyway this is great job for sure!keep it up!
 
Old 09 September 2004   #13
hi oblivionblack, what you see, really are the stones of the water. But the reason of that is just artistic, esthetic, cause i have never been in Venice, but i wanted to give it my style. Of course, it could be better.

Thanks !!!
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Old 09 September 2004   #14
This is amazing I totally love the lighting. But still you could add some interesting details on the ground close to the camera. Some small grass between the tiles or and insect on the tube would add more charm to this illustration.
 
Old 09 September 2004   #15
nice one!
 
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