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Old 07-23-2002, 03:04 PM   #1
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BMW 323i



Hello All,
This is my first post on CGtalk, just wanted some feed back on my BMW.

Thanks.
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Old 07-23-2002, 03:56 PM   #2
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Cool stuff, I like it really
 
Old 07-23-2002, 03:59 PM   #3
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wow, that's great.. my fav car too.. more pics? stats? thanks!
 
Old 07-23-2002, 04:01 PM   #4
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wow, That's one fine piece of modeling! I think the car is very nice.

To the crits:

The wheels, I don't like the material, maybe chrome it up, it's too white.

And the background scene bothers me a bit, use depth of field to blur it. Also the bricks on the ground are to bumpy and to large, I would scale them down about 3 times.

Also I think the render is a bit grey, brighten it up.

Great work, keep us posted! Your modeling skills are very good!

Have fun,

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Old 07-23-2002, 05:08 PM   #5
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Good work..
Can we see some wireframes..?

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Old 07-23-2002, 05:33 PM   #6
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Here are the wire frames.
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Old 07-23-2002, 05:38 PM   #7
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Wire frame rear.
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Old 07-23-2002, 06:20 PM   #8
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Sweet, the mesh looks very clean nice.

Good work on materials too, maybe the rims can be tuned as mentioned.

Otherwise a very impressive piece of craftmanship !!
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Old 07-24-2002, 10:41 AM   #9
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good

man, you a good ! Great work!
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Old 07-24-2002, 02:11 PM   #10
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WOW. This looks real to me.

Shure - one of the best car renders I have ever seen!

Perfect Job!

Well done
 
Old 07-24-2002, 02:14 PM   #11
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What kind of software do you use?

in fact the mesh looks beautifull

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Old 07-24-2002, 02:17 PM   #12
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I like everything except the black windows. Superbly modeled.
 
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wow....its really nice.
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Old 07-24-2002, 02:30 PM   #14
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wohoo!

bavarian engineering at itīs best! really nice model, but i have some crits. the tire-rim looks not original, too smooth.
also, the headlights should have a more reflevtive look. last but not least, the black windows look a little too "knight rider"-style, but i guess you didnīt model the interior, so thatīs ok for me

overall, nice model!

 
Old 07-24-2002, 02:42 PM   #15
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Excellent. The mesh looks very nice and clean as said. ++ for you!

I dislike the windows however. Too dark. A subtle tint I think would look better (though seemingly with no interior I dont know how that'd look). I love the 323i so I really dig this model.
 
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