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Old 04-27-2004, 03:01 AM   #1
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finalfantasy fanart

hello everyone.. my first time here and still nervous (too many godamn artist)i just feel like small ant m(_ _)m
C&C plz

http://www.deviantart.com/view/6829540/
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Old 04-27-2004, 08:34 AM   #2
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Good collage

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- Centre character needs more depth on his armour and sword

- Girl on the right, I dont know if shes meant to look like that but she looks a bit mascualine.
 
Old 04-27-2004, 09:51 AM   #3
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Wow, very good use of color, I love almost everything about this piece.
I don't really like the girls face to the right of cloud. It seems a bit manly and a little rushed. If possible, maybe narrow the chin a little, i think this will help.
Also i don't undertand why clouds sword has a huge ball at the end of it?
I really love the girls face in the upper right hand corner, its simply beautiful. I hope you update this image with the proper changes. Great job!

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Old 04-27-2004, 08:16 PM   #4
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...hehe .. i like that alligator ...!! maybe crocodile ..... anyway it's a very good work ...
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Old 04-28-2004, 01:27 PM   #5
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ah..thanks everyone..
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