|04 April 2004||#1|
Join Date: Apr 2004
this is my first post here or anywhere for that matter,
i started with a pencil sketch and then worked with a wacom tablet in photoshop 7,
Last edited by direndra : 06 June 2004 at 08:13 AM.
|04 April 2004||#5|
If his blood and everything is still that soupy then it means he still has some moisture in him yet. Id like to see the addition of some dark semi coagulated blood filld veins in the upper chest area anyways. I think it would add to the character to make him seem a little more fresh. Also mabe fill in some substance between those ribs a little bit might do the trick too. Just my opinions. Looking really good though.
|05 May 2004||#9|
Join Date: Jul 2003
what to say...i've been seeing this since few months when you have been developing this...and its come up very well.
Gr8 work there and You ROCK
" Any fool can paint a picture, but it takes a wise man to be able to sell it"
" Good art is in the wallet of the beholder."
Last edited by harshdesign : 11 November 2005 at 02:19 PM.
|05 May 2004||#10|
wow, really cool. yeah, i agree with sypher in that the hand is too big. i kind of looks out of place. the rest of the body seems like rotting delicate flesh while the hand looks like a block of concrete. it also, doesn't flow into the arm very well. i kind of get the feeling like it's going to break off. also, the line quality and detail veries from part to part. the face and ax have a lot of detail while the rest of the body, especially the cloth, look less refined. i love the ax. the blood on it looks really cool. the face is definately very good. overall, very cool.
|05 May 2004||#11|
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Join Date: Aug 2003
This is excellent !
You again inspire me to buy that wacom.... dreaminggg....
Some crits -
The hand is not gripping the axe properly, theres a lot of space in between.
The jawline seems to be wrongly placed and too sharp.
The left foot should go behind the body, he looks as if he'll fall backwards if left standing....balance prob.
The cloths needs some details.
The patch of 'something' in right bottom is not blending well with overall image.
But I think these are minor....
|07 July 2004||#12|
what's up direndra,
I think people may have commented on this stuff already, but
Composition in general
Character design and especially the design of the weapon
Decent anatomy and good cloth look.
Things that could be improved:
I think the whole painting would have a darker feel if it's night time and under moon light, also if you choose to have the moon bright in back of him, he will be backlit and more of a silouette.
Proportions and relationships of anatomy need a little fine tuning, study George Bridgman anatomy books available everywhere (head is feeling slightly too big, right hand too big, the structure of the shoulder into the upper arm looks like some guesswork)
The character is off balance.
I'm very impressed by the temperature relationships you've achieved and the form rendering using color, that's very difficult for a lot of people.
"He who draws with a pencil, still posesses the magic."
|07 July 2004||#13|
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Join Date: Jun 2004
This is just nasty.
You have a pale color pallette, a sickly colored zombie and just an overall opressive gross feel to the whole painting.
Now, let's see you draw some flowers
Sleep is for the weak.