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Old 04 April 2004   #1
Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: Lavon Woods

Lavon Woods has entered the Machineflesh 3D Challenge.
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Old 04 April 2004   #2
Hey Lavon .... welcome to the challenge man.... cant wait to see what your going to bring to the table........cheers PFB
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Old 04 April 2004   #3
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Hey ParadiseFlyBird thanks for welcoming me in( ). As you know already i am brand new here and i decided to give the contest a go.

My concept is the ultimate soldier altered by an underground secret government agency. His is like a rambo on steriods. I believe my concept is the essence of the word "MachineFlesh".

I should have some concept art uploaded by tomorrow. I will be looking forward to what people have to say. Please dont hold back the criticism.

Till next time........
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Old 04 April 2004   #4
Concept Sketch: Initial Concept sketches



This is an initial sketch of what the character will look like. It is really rough. I will be changing the bottom half of the character, anyone have any suggestions?
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Old 04 April 2004   #5
Concept Sketch: engine pack w/ wings



This is a side view of the engine. The engine is attatched to the metal spine. The F16 wings shoot out of the side of it. There are two chafs built into the two shoulder blades to shoot skineez.
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Old 04 April 2004   #6
Concept Sketch: T stance



Another little sketch. This is a profile sketch of the characters top half. The back of the skull will be see throught similar to the back of a mac computer. You will be able to see the video tube, gears and chips. The abdamin area will also be see through. This is where the pistons and inner workings will be housed.
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Old 04 April 2004   #7
Modeling: Torso



A little modeling update to show progress
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Old 04 April 2004   #8
Modeling: Upper_Body



A little update. Any comments? I am new here it would be appreciated.
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Old 04 April 2004   #9
I dig it Lavon!! But maybe i dig it because my model is simlier to yours

hehehe.

I llike the head on your character, and the gas mask he is wearing. I'll be watching this thread Good luck!!

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Old 04 April 2004   #10
Modeling: Body



A little modeling update with some temporary textures. I am new here, Any Comments?
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Old 04 April 2004   #11
Nice details on anatomy, alhought you may have check their proportions. I like your concept, and modelling goes well.

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Old 04 April 2004   #12
Tremoside which proportions are off, could you be a bit more specific please. And Thanks for the advice.
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Old 04 April 2004   #13
Looks quiet good so far.

I try to list you what my eyes tell me bout the anatomy.
I think its one thing: Tte modeled bumps look not "rounded enough, look too much like extrusions and "platey" if that word describes it, or too quadric, or boxy. Try to smooth them, pay attention on the leading lines, where muscles and bones have the transition into the next shape.

The group on the side of the chest, on your skiet's you showed the spindleshaped musclegroup nicely closing into eachother like a "Zipper" and on your model, thes seem to be like "attached wrong, tips meet each other.

Breastmuscle/Biceps/shouldermuscle, looks too boxy. on his head, the volumes around cheeks, browbows, eyes, needs to be refined,

In the profile, there seems to be something wrong with the neck.

The back, as he seems to be very muscular, should also get a bit more defined.

THe all overimpression he makes is good. So keep on refining him and rock em all! Best luck and make us go wow, let it rock!!!!!!
 
Old 04 April 2004   #14
Modeling: Ultimate Soldier



Thanks the1st_angel for all of your comments I really appreciate it. Keep it coming.

I made some adjustments to the body and the neck. I want to head to look odly shaped because that is the character of the character. The Face is far from done though. As a matter of fact the whole thing is far from done, so there will be many more updates to come.

I think I've come up with an idea for the bottom half of the character so look for that soon

Thanks Again!!
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Old 04 April 2004   #15
Modeling: Ultimate Soldier



Just a little update. Added a spotlight to see how it would look. Check it out!
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