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Old 03-19-2004, 03:55 AM   #1
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New Site please critique

Just posted my new site. 90% done in Flash.

I would like to thank every one from the forums that helped me.

Any feed back greatly appreciated.

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Old 04-03-2004, 02:41 AM   #2
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hey, nice page. i really like the stylistic interface with the squares. i also liked your rotoscoping video with the guitarist and drummer. that would make a very cool music video. i think your site is a little lacking in content though, but i'm sure you'll get aroud to that. over all, i liked it.
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Old 04-04-2004, 03:20 AM   #3
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I'm gonna be honest because it's better to get an honest opinon.

Firstly I think it has a good concept behind it, but 'cause you're in flash you can do some nifty things to make the design even more fancy. As a suggestion I would probably have some smaller grey (or desaturated blue) squares floating about a bit, maybe even avoiding to the mouse, in the background. Just to add some motion. And as it is a pretty clean but empty design, I would consider some sound, I know people say it's awful when a site has sound, and people almost always do a poor job, but it could really add to your site. It might also add more bandwidth and slower load times so you might just say no to that. If I were to use sound I'd use a soft sound that won't be too bothering.

I definatly like the squares down the bottom. They look neat and move well.

Just some personal criticism, hope it helps, or you ignore it. Either is cool.
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