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Old 03 March 2004   #1
One Prayer



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Old 03 March 2004   #2
no reply so far...

well I liked it a lot cool work..

I didn't like door.. looks little flat..

but good work
 
Old 03 March 2004   #3
Wow, no reply yet?!? I like this, I think you did a great job on almost everything. Great textures and models, and the Lighting is done nicely also. Couple things I noticed. The wooden floor boards arent aligned near the bottom of the pic, like the texture is off or something. This is creating a very visible seam. Also maybe the textures in the room are a bit too repetitive. Maybe try throwing some different colors in there to liven things up a bit. Like the chair doesnt have to be the same color as the bed frame and shelving, mix things up a bit. Theres alot of gold. Well thats all from me, Great WORK!!

ooh one more thing, maybe add the side boards that run across the bottom of walls in most homes.
 
Old 03 March 2004   #4
Great warmth and composition, beautiful pallette. The modelling is top notch also! As a matter of fact, I cand find anything to crit here. I like that the image conveys some kind of story (the suitcase, the book) we feel like she is on a journey, away from home. Very nice. I'd love to see some wires, and hear a bit about software used, renderer, etc. Was this just for fun? Will there be an animation?
 
Old 03 March 2004   #5
Very nice job! I love your style you got going here. nice objects and great texturing. The only things that bug me a little are a couple shadows, the one on the bed sheet is a bit harsh and kinda flattens it out a bit and also the one on the girls leg may be a bit harsh too, but just a bit. Also perhaps the pendulem on the clock in the upper left corner could be straight up and down. The mid swing of it currently adds some tension or dynamism to the otherwise very calm and peaceful scene. Just tiny things to help. Very good job I think!
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Old 03 March 2004   #6
really like your image

nice shaders,and great lighting

but you should release the girl from it, unless you maek a 3d one

she doesn't seem to fit in it

besides that, i wouldnt change a bit of it
 
Old 03 March 2004   #7
I like the girl in the scene, and the whole scene in general.

This is quite a nice change from the monsters and demons and ultra-tech stuff we usually see on here.

The big crit: I also noticed the board's texture along the bottom do not match up at the seam of the tile ( I imagine). You should really fix that.

Great work.
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Old 03 March 2004   #8
Hi all glad that you liked my work i will absoloutly fix the floor here are a wire i am not proud of it because it is a bit of a mess but anyway for you who like to see wire here it is.

as you understand the hair was painted after in photoshop.
 
Old 03 March 2004   #9
very nice...

just one mmiiinoor nitpick.

are there glass on the door the girl is facing.. should there be a smidge of reflection of the floor, and perhaps the girl.

maybe not.. i dunno.. still awesome
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Old 03 March 2004   #10
Beautiful! I love it! it feels warm and calm.. great render.

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Old 03 March 2004   #11
Stunning work!
Maybe make the indoorlight a little colder in contrast to the warm sunset?
That way you can get a neat backlight on the girl and put her a little bit more in focus
 
Old 03 March 2004   #12
Linda? 3D Artist named Linda from Sweden? Gee, I thought we didn't have ANY girls doing 3d here...Bravo!! More of that...Where do you work?

PS: Looks great by the way...warm feeling...Praying...hmmm...afraid of not passing the test tomorrow maybe? ;-)

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Old 03 March 2004   #13
Beautiful image, and nice composition, kinda reminds me of the trailer Polar Express. What app did you use? And yeah aside from the floor boards, it's a great image. Is it possible to see the lil girl by her lonesome? A close-up if you will.

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-lild
 
Old 03 March 2004   #14
It's good except for the bed sheet, it looks like clay and it's to "boxy"...
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Old 03 March 2004   #15
i love the feel of it.
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