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Old 02-07-2004, 02:30 AM   #1
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Character: Lightning


This one is also done with the comic influence. He's one of the characters of my soon to be comic. Assuming I start soon.
 
Old 02-07-2004, 10:47 AM   #2
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First, the linework:
I do think the silouette is a bit unclear, especially with his left arm.
Try to put him on a white paper and black out the whole figure, when its obvious whats hes doing, then you have a nice silouette, and the character is easier to read.

Right now its hard figuring out if he just stuck his finger into the broken lamp or if hes got some weird superpowers going.

Hi face shows a lot of anger, let that be reflected in his pose, feets spred, body ready to attack?

The colour:
I like the colourwork, but you do seem to be in the middle of the process of colouring. The flames in his hands needs a bit more details aswell as the reflected light on him.

Hope you do take some time and touch up the details and start with the comic darn it!


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