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Old 04-15-2014, 11:59 AM   #1
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Baby Spiderman, danifrau87 (3D)



Title: Baby Spiderman
Name: danifrau87
Submitted: 15th April 2014

THIS IS A PICTURE CREATED FOR THE CONTEST “BABY COMICS” OF THE WEBSITE “TREDDI.COM”.
THE IDEA WAS TO CREATE A BABY SPIDERMAN THAT STEALS THE GOBLIN’S BIBERON...SOMEONE SAYS THAT EVERYTHING STARTS FROM HERE.
HERE BEGAN THE ETERNAL RIVALITY BETWEEN GOBLIN AND SPIDERMAN.






 
Old 04-19-2014, 10:52 PM   #2
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Interesting composition.
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Old 04-20-2014, 06:31 PM   #3
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thank you yuriki
 
Old 05-14-2014, 09:58 AM   #4
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Haha thats a really cool Image Dani, Spidey Stealin goblins baby bottle xD loved the idea for this image, and the lighting too.

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Old 05-14-2014, 10:07 AM   #5
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Thank you DaveAlej, I'm happy that you like that
 
Old 05-14-2014, 11:22 AM   #6
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This is cute as hell well done!
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Old 05-14-2014, 12:35 PM   #7
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I really like the composition, but I had to look at the scene twice to understand the POV. I would rotate the camera a little bit more, to make clear that baby spider is on the ceiling.

This is just an opinion, of course
 
Old 05-14-2014, 08:04 PM   #8
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how cute, the beef between these too go way back
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Old 05-15-2014, 11:45 PM   #9
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To me, the baby Green Goblin doesn't read. It just looks like a normal baby. The intense sun ray really gets in the way of seeing the Goblin's skin color and details (like the pointy ears and purple costume)

Also, it's unclear if Spidey stole the bottle from Green Goblin or is just taunting Goblin by holding his own bottle (Spidey's bottle) over him.

Either way, it seems like Spider-Man a jerk.
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Old 05-16-2014, 04:31 PM   #10
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FreeFly90 - Thank you, how you'll rotate it ?

DuttyFoot - Thank you .

Navstar - you're probably right, I could take better care goblins, but I do not think that the laying of spiderman is misunderstood, but thanks for your careful opinion .
 
Old 05-17-2014, 11:05 AM   #11
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The first thing I would do is to rotate the camera, spider-man gives the idea of someone standing on the floor, and even if he has superpowers, gravity cannot be ignored.
Moreover, the door is an important element of the scene, and from this point of view it looks like a poster. After rotating the camera, I would try to put it some cm closer to the top-left corner...

As I said, it's just an idea, your work is amazing like this
 
Old 05-18-2014, 07:41 AM   #12
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Originally Posted by Navstar
To me, the baby Green Goblin doesn't read. It just looks like a normal baby. The intense sun ray really gets in the way of seeing the Goblin's skin color and details (like the pointy ears and purple costume)

Also, it's unclear if Spidey stole the bottle from Green Goblin or is just taunting Goblin by holding his own bottle (Spidey's bottle) over him.

Either way, it seems like Spider-Man a jerk.


agreed about the strong sunlight. I had to look twice to see what was going on. Colour choices should be better considered to catch the viewers attention more and make the image more clear upon first glance. because there's a strong glare, the spidey web isn't as clear as it should be, and neither is the bottle or goblin. it all sort of falls into the background.
 
Old 05-22-2014, 10:32 PM   #13
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Nice concept! The lighting and composition do make the Green Goblin difficult to read. Perhaps if the room was bigger, you could push the crib/cot further away, bringing it into the frame more. The colour and lighting needs to put more focus on the two characters too. Green Goblin is obstructed by glare.
 
Old 07-18-2014, 05:28 PM   #14
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Thank you FreeFly90 for your answr .
Yes I think that there is more over Glare and Deep of Field in the scene.
I will take your comment for the next composition.
Thank you so much to everybody .
 
Old 10-14-2014, 08:21 PM   #15
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Very Nice! I really enjoy the lighting.
 
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