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Old 04-26-2013, 09:59 PM   #1
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Skydock WIP

I have begun work today on a project for my art class, here is my current progress:

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Old 04-27-2013, 12:37 AM   #2
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You may want to post a better lit shot or just a gray model so we can see whats going on. It's too dark to give you any real feedback.
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Old 04-27-2013, 03:46 AM   #3
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You may want to post a better lit shot or just a gray model so we can see whats going on. It's too dark to give you any real feedback.

Here an opengl render:

I am planing on textuting the part that shows up on the render as brown.
 
Old 04-27-2013, 04:03 AM   #4
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Hey man,

Could you maybe share a little more information about your project? Do you have any sketches or reference material you can share? No one can really help you when you just post a picture of a floating rock and ask for feedback. We need a little more than that.

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Old 04-30-2013, 02:41 PM   #5
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I've blocked out the basic scene now:

Lots of work to still be done.
 
Old 05-06-2013, 02:18 PM   #6
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Update:

Ship is the next target to texture and fix the model, and then move on to texturing the floating rock.
 
Old 05-08-2013, 02:45 PM   #7
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Update:

Please critique my work, I want to know what I'm doing wrong.
 
Old 05-10-2013, 02:40 PM   #8
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Begun work on texturing cargo ship:
 
Old 05-10-2013, 02:55 PM   #9
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AJ1 as ask you a question. You never aswer him

If you explain the final composition or the movement of the camera we can help you focus on the main thing.

For me your bunker is too cylinder. Or is it a aircraft shed?

Any way you really need to give us some hints about your project. The boat is flying? Is it docking on the rock for something? you need a story to tell
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Old 05-11-2013, 07:31 AM   #10
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Please critique my work, I want to know what I'm doing wrong.

What your doing wrong is not providing us with enough information about your project. Just like Samuel said, we need to know more about what your trying to achieve here.

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Old 05-14-2013, 02:42 PM   #11
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Sorry for not being clear, the building is supposed to be a storage facility for cargo, and I agree it needs more work. The ship and the rock are supposed to be floating. The general idea is to create a dock, just like one by the sea, just that mines is in the sky and sorta futuristic. Again sorry for not answering your questions.
Here's an update on the progress I have made:
 
Old 05-16-2013, 01:48 PM   #12
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Found a good hdri map for my background:

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Old 05-16-2013, 02:53 PM   #13
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You really need to filllight these rocks.. I don't see a think.
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Old 05-16-2013, 03:06 PM   #14
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Would you mind sharing your hdri? I'm curious as to how it looks
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You really need to filllight these rocks.. I don't see a think.

What does this mean?
 
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