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Old 04-22-2013, 02:20 AM   #1
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Alcyne Cough Medicine (WIP)

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Critiques are much appreciated.
 
Old 04-24-2013, 08:16 AM   #2
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Hey man,

That bottle really doesn't stand out well against that background. Is there anyway you can change the gradient so the color extends further up the frame? Having more contrast in your gradient would help clean up some of the banding you get when it gets run though the jpeg compression.

It might also help to light the bottle more from the front, so the edges are darker and stand out more. The shadow under the cap also looks way to dark and dense. The shadow between the ground and the bottle looks to tight. Your cap model looks too sharp, and the shadowing is too dark and dense.

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