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Old 04-21-2013, 08:47 PM   #1
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11 Second Club - April 2013

Hey everyone, I was hoping I could get some feedback on my entry for this months 11 Second Club. The folks who participate on their sites forum seem to be less inclined to help the competition, so I thought maybe I'd have better luck getting some responses here.

I apologize for not being able to simply embed the video here but it seems CG Talk doesn't support Youtube and it's kind of pointless to wait for Vimeo to post when I'm just dealing with a work-in-progress post. Please visit the link below,

11 Second Club - April 2013
 
Old 04-22-2013, 12:58 AM   #2
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Hi Zack!
Where is the main guy looking? because at times it is not very clear especially with his tiny sunken eyes.
Also if you have time maybe you could do something different with the 2nd guy, as the dropping the shoulders and looking at the ground is a very cliche' move and i think there would be lots of versions of happening in this months competition.

Good luck with the competition and I look forward to seeing it finished.

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Old 04-22-2013, 04:23 AM   #3
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Thanks for taking a look! I'll take another look at his line of sight next time I get in the scene.

I had a second idea for how the other character should react to this guys ramblings but I wasn't sure which one would be best. Maybe I'll try blocking that one out and see if it's any better.


Thanks!
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