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Old 03-26-2013, 12:46 PM   #1
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Sci Fi Environment Concept

Done entirely in Photoshop with some photographic 'kit bashing'


 
Old 04-05-2013, 01:24 AM   #2
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I assume this is unfinished, since some areas seem less refined.

If the foreground is supposed to be the main focal point, then you background is currently stealing away all the attention, because it's much sharper, detailed, and higher in contrast. I suggest you alter the lighting for the foreground so that it can steal back the attention it needs in order to be the main focal point.
 
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Thanks robert, you're right.
Next time I should do a lighting thumbnail before diving in I think.
 
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indeed, now makes me wanna see more of the city and damn balcony is in the way
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