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Old 02 February 2013   #1
Jumping WIP

http://vimeo.com/60301741

This is just where I am at right now in the project. I'm need some critiques on this so I can begin polishing this up.
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Old 02 February 2013   #2
the start looks great but then he kind of stops moving for way too many frames.
Then the actual jump is a few frames too quick.
You might also want to give him a bigger overshoot after the jump

keep up the good work
-Yasha
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Old 02 February 2013   #3
What do you mean when you say overshoot?
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Old 02 February 2013   #4
when he lands, make sure his body doesn't just go straight to the end pose, make it go a little bit further and then come back and settle into the last pose
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Old 03 March 2013   #5
Polished version of the jump

https://vimeo.com/61416323
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Old 03 March 2013   #6
Why did you change the camera angle? Your previous version looked a lot more interesting.


Have the character step forward sooner so that he catches his weight and doesn't feel like he is going to fall flat on his face.
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