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Old 02-02-2013, 12:41 PM   #1
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Male head

Ive been sculpting this head for a while but I cant seem to get it right. I feel it doesn't look human and just cant see whats wrong. Ive been looking at images online trying to see if its a proportion issue or a skin flow issue but just cant pin point it. If anyone could please critique the head and give suggestions to improve on its realism, I would really appreciate it.


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Old 02-10-2013, 02:09 PM   #2
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It would be easier to comment on this if we would have also a look at your reference images. The ear is somehow strange - but since ears are can have pretty strange forms (or in this case more the transition between head and ear)...
I also think that the line on the chin has a too hard transition from wrinkle to not wrinkle - it could be smoother. and of course color, wrinkles and skinpattern make a big difference.
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Old 02-10-2013, 10:24 PM   #3
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Thanks for the suggestions. Would you say this is better, or does it still still look a little off?

Old 02-10-2013, 11:03 PM   #4
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It looks okay to me. Without your reference image it isn't possible for us to compare it with anything.
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Old 02-10-2013, 11:52 PM   #5
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To me, the eyes look a little too far apart and the whole face looks too symmetrical. You really need to post your references.
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