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  01 January 2013
Children's book illustration

This is wip for a childrens book im working on. It is a two page spread and text will be placed on each page on the upper left part of the walls. Can I get a quick crit or some tips for making this better. Would appreciate it very much. Thanks!

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  01 January 2013
Originally Posted by mtoh: This is wip for a childrens book im working on. It is a two page spread and text will be placed on each page on the upper left part of the walls. Can I get a quick crit or some tips for making this better. Would appreciate it very much. Thanks!


Hi there only two things I can say, well actually 3, but the first two are, 1) why does it feel grainy? 2) Bottom penguin, have him looking up to the other, offering the item found, it keeps your eye moving, and bonds them together.

The third is well done, I really like the overall the small details and the play of the room

Hope the comments help.
 
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