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Old 09-26-2012, 06:17 AM   #1
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Rough Draft Sketches looking for Critique


Cyborg Character, Burn Victim, Mask controls breathing, Chest piece to control Heart rate and lung functions, Spine pieces to stimulate the nerves.


Same universe as the Cyborg. Just not injured like the first.


This image is a modified version of a group project i was working on. Due to time restrictions in school im redoing the project and looking for last min ideas before i begin modeling again.


Aimed to be the embodiment of you are what you eat, smoke, or drink. However not a bad guy... just not healthy choices
 
Old 09-28-2012, 05:18 AM   #2
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You need to give us details behind each image, what the premises are, what the image will be used for, what are the things you struggled with and needs help, who these characters are and what roles they play in the story, as well as their personalities, or any other detail that has relevance to their visual design.

When you post a bunch of sketches without any relevant information, we have no idea what your purpose is and what you need help with.
 
Old 09-28-2012, 05:38 AM   #3
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Some of this info was already posted but just to give more info on them

The first 3 are designed to be lowpoly next gen game characters. Maybe around the 12-14k poly with accessories. The first 2 are within a the same Universe.

The top one is intended as a burn victim that is being kept alive with mechanical parts aka "cyborg" The spine pieces down the back probably won't have that cable between them just due to doesn't seem as good as just having the cylinders down the back. The mask is physically attached to the face and can't be removed. Sci fi futuristic world

On the second character he is originally designed as the sidekick type character for the cyborg. Not injured like the other so he won't have the cyborg like parts. Just a mix of Hard Surface armoring and a skin suit underneath the armor. Sci fi futuristic world

The third is based as an odd way of making an alchemist. He will be a character that is supposed to be fairly weak, but intimidating. Based in a

The final is just a random character design probably for more of a still scene instead of any real animation purpose. Just an interesting idea to show the effects of eating unhealthy, smoking, and drinking.

All of these sketches are in a first draft state so i'm looking for peoples reactions. Things that stand out as far as out of place, likes or dislikes about the designs. Any feed back would be nice.

Any questions about the models if you don't understand what im wanting would help too. if im not getting the idea across as a drawing it probably won't be fixed as a model either.

Thanks for the help

~Fearoshiima~
 
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What is your ultimate goal? What do you want to focus on as an artist?
 
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