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Old 08-02-2012, 04:07 PM   #1
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Locomotive Feedback

Hi all,

This is my entry for the recent cgchallenge. I'm probably not going to have time to go back over this image, but I'm just hoping to get some general feedback about the rendering, so I can take some learnings to my future projects. Thanks!

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Old 08-06-2012, 06:48 PM   #2
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No feedback. Must mean it's perfect! So, why didn't I win/get accepted into the gallery?
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Old 08-07-2012, 08:46 PM   #3
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Your flying cows are to "stif" maybe try to rig them an pose them.
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Old 08-07-2012, 09:22 PM   #4
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Yeah, I definitely need to get better at skinning and rigging. They are rigged, but not skinned well. So, when I moved them around to much, they started to look a little funny.

Any thoughts on lighting, composition, etc.?
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Old 08-08-2012, 12:48 AM   #5
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you can add some motionblur to the wheels
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Haha loving it

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Old 08-09-2012, 04:57 PM   #7
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Thanks, Andre. I try to bring a little humor into some of my work...
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