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Old 11-28-2003, 07:30 AM   #1
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Been working on this for about 5 hours, wondering what you guys think. BTW the current poly count is 3050 triangles.

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Old 11-28-2003, 11:05 AM   #2
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The thigh is a bit skinny.Could you fatten them up and the knee joint looks weird to me.The upper body looks quite ok to me.
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Old 11-28-2003, 11:12 AM   #3
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My guess is, from how the body to knees is shaped, that hes going to be a hunchback. I see some problems on how his body will deform in the animations. Its a bit hard to explain. Also isnt the connection from legs to body a bit rough? I think you should make that flow better considering the design of the legs.
Also you have added the needed extra rows on the fingers but the upper arms are at a lack of these. Add some there too.

I dont know but this model feels like a good design that have something missing. I think bulkier legs and arms would do it good.
Also the head, whats going on there? Atleast i want some closer pictures :P
Old 11-29-2003, 02:53 AM   #4
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It is a bit hard to see from these screenshots, but there are the added edges on the elbow and shoulder of the arms. The legs I need work on, I'm thinking I shall add some kneepads as well. Thanks for the crits, I'll be texturing this thing like made in the next two weeks.
Old 11-29-2003, 03:07 AM   #5
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well, it seems to have very little detial for that many polies. It seems you have some wasted in the joints.....

also, those smoothinggroups hurt my eyes fix them!!!
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