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Old 11 November 2003   #1
Character:sports girl

hi all,this is my recent work

I hope you'll enjoy and give me some feedback,thx




 
Old 11 November 2003   #2
Not bad. But you could fix that small piece of hair that seems to be floating above the rest of her head, unless it's intended to be that way.
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Old 11 November 2003   #3
looks great...... lovely pose !...... great material on the pants !

as far as crits go .... maybe soften her collar bone .. its alittle too prominant.
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Old 11 November 2003   #4
very nice
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Old 11 November 2003   #5
good job. but she

-is a little too reflective near her neck.
-looks a little pale/dead on her cheeks

in the close up. The first render is excellent, good job on the clothes. An environment would do her well
 
Old 11 November 2003   #6
the modeling is great except the ears and stomach area
and you need to pay more attention to texturing

work on them and you will get a great peice
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Old 11 November 2003   #7
pretty good.....some crits tho...

1) head seems bigger than her body to me.....
2) hands look stiff.....would be better if u can put one hand on her weist and other on her thigh...or just band it a lil bit from the elbow....
3)boobs look lil odd.... just make it more natural.....
4) face is cute....i liked it.....


keep up the good work
 
Old 11 November 2003   #8
not a bad start

but... *cough* wires *cough* plz
 
Old 11 November 2003   #9
Face is nice, but the ears look pretty unrealistic :/
 
Old 11 November 2003   #10
On the ear, the top front portion where it attaches to the head needs to taper inward more. That small area is what's making the ear look odd at the moment.
I agree with nadeemmar. Improving on some of the small details will make this a very nice model. Actually it already is, but the small things like the ear stand out as problem areas. Those "small" things sometimes take the longest time to fix but keep at it.
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Old 11 November 2003   #11
Hm, that looks exactly like Maggie Q on the 2nd pic
 
Old 11 November 2003   #12
There are no bottom eyelashes, and IMO you should make the top ones stand out more. They are almost invisible in the medium shot.

The ear problem was already been mentioned.

Your texture colors look nice, but material makes it look a little wet and plastic like. Trying playing with you specularity maps.

The model really is beautiful and is but a few small tweaks away from being a complete piece. Of course those are always the hardest .
 
Old 11 November 2003   #13
I agree that she looks like Maggie Q, and this is better if u can scale down her head. It looks too big comparing with her body.
 
Old 11 November 2003   #14
Hey, I don't know what you think, but I would go for a lower waist of the pants. It looks more sexy:

 
Old 11 November 2003   #15
thanks for reply£º£©

i'll do more on the detail
 
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