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Old 05-14-2013, 12:49 AM   #1
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Lince ibérico (Lynx pardina) for my reel

A Lynx pardina for my lighting/fur and hair reel. I`m learning little by little fur and hair techniques, a lot of work.

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Old 05-16-2013, 10:51 AM   #2
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Wow, this looks really good to me, nice work on the fur. I think the dark lighting is letting it down just a little bit. Maybe it could use more fill?
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Thanks for reply dude. Yes, its a little too dark. The main reason its because i did not work the eyes properly, so, with more light, they look weird.
 
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How are you doing the eyes? Have you accurately modelled the lens, iris, etc.?
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Yes, the eyes was accurately modelled, but the texturing and shading was not my best work. I will focus more in the eyes in mi next character.
 
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If it were me, I'd push to make the eyes better in this piece. You've posted it in the WIP section, why not finish it?
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sounds good

Right now im working in a shortfilm (plus my work in the office), and i dont have much time, but, sounds good, i will work more in the eyes. Thanks dude
 
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i thank the eyes it need more work
 
Old 05-21-2013, 04:01 AM   #9
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The coat color is really good and the direction of hair growth looks accurate.

To me the face looks a little too long and the eyes a little too big. The upper eye lid seams like it needs to come down farther and it could use more dark around the eyes themselves. the ears look to be a too close together. There is also a stiffness about it that may just be lack of fluffiness in the coat. I did a quick paint over to show what I'm seeing.

 
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The coat color is really good and the direction of hair growth looks accurate.

To me the face looks a little too long and the eyes a little too big. The upper eye lid seams like it needs to come down farther and it could use more dark around the eyes themselves. the ears look to be a too close together. There is also a stiffness about it that may just be lack of fluffiness in the coat. I did a quick paint over to show what I'm seeing.




Thanks dude, when i put hand again on the linx i will keep this in mind.
 
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