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02 February 2004 | |
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Lord of the posts
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Patrick Wong
Modeling Grunt
Vancouver,
Canada
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Character: Asian
![]() I'll say i finish after all kinds of comments and critiques. Thx for all who gave me feed back. Right up to this point, i'll stop working on her for awhile. Actually at the beginning this is just a test model for my edge loops study. Its done in XSI, texture in photoshop. By the way, tell me if the image doesn't load. __________________
Check me out! ---->HapZungLam portfolio<---- Demo Reel right here Youtube channel with tutorials |
02 February 2004 | |
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KDI
Kvitko Dmitri
hmm blah
Finland
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really cute!
everything looks nice but eyes are looking not really naturally good work anyway ![]() __________________
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02 February 2004 | |
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Veteran
CGI artist
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Very nice job!,
Yeah, maybe the textures in the eye... Good modeling and textures! ![]() __________________
DrPepper _______________________________________________ My XsiNetview : www.renaudbergeron.com/ |
02 February 2004 | |
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--Disturbed--
Ari M. Robbins
High School Student (freashmen)
USA
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Ahhh, I'm falling in love!
![]() That has to be one of the best asain faces Iv seen. The hair doesn't to the face justice. I would paint it in if i were u. __________________
Due to power conservation, the light at the end of the tunnel is temporarily turned off. |
02 February 2004 | |
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Veteran
None
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Damn thats wack, almost looks like a good friend of mine.
Nice job on that! |
02 February 2004 | |
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New Member
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![]() ![]() ![]() Only one problem i think her left eye is a little bit to bloodshot. If it wasnt so bloodshot it would look so much better (if it could be any better ![]() |
02 February 2004 | |
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Maya User
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Scott Hampshire
Projectionist
Canada
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I'm not too sure I like the bump on the eyes, it makes it look like there's no moisture on them. Other than that, it's a really nice model
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I'm going to live forever, or die trying. |
02 February 2004 | |
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Veteran
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bohao lu
student
Taiwan
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![]() maybe can make her looks better............ ![]() |
02 February 2004 | |
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AnimationMentor - Alumnus
Konrad Kruszewski
Animator/Graphic Designer
VerizonWireless
Sacramento,
USA
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i think its unanimous(sp?): "great model, fix the eyes!"
![]() i think you may have gone a bit overboard on the detail in the eyes. the blood vessels look too pronounced and too long, and the bump-mapping on the inside corner of her left (our right) eye is a bit extreme. for a picture this realistic (and beautiful!!), there's a point where you have to stop reaching for realism, and make a break for artistic license. the only other thing i can possibly find thats not stunning, is the hair roots. they look like a doll's hair stapled into the plastic scalp. i have absolutely no idea what you could do to bypass that (maybe just blurring it in post??), though.... maybe its the hair strands not casting any shadows.... __________________
---------- "people cannot tell where darkness comes from or from what direction it arrives" www.animationmentor.com www.analoggshokk.com |
02 February 2004 | |
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Lord of the posts
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Patrick Wong
Modeling Grunt
Vancouver,
Canada
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i've temperaly blur the veins of the eyeball. and I've lower the bump value on my scene file.
For the hair... well, there has shadows. The concern from darkefire it is because i should thiner the hair alot more and add alot more strands to it. But I don't know how long will it take for render. It is because this image took me more than 30 hours to render. __________________
Check me out! ---->HapZungLam portfolio<---- Demo Reel right here Youtube channel with tutorials |
02 February 2004 | |
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Owner of NeoSpawn Games
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Jeremy Jones
3D artist and computer bum
NeoSpawn Games
Mount Vernon,
USA
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30 hours?!?! whoa.....thats a long ass time...anywho the model is beautiful. I think the eyes are fine (though probaly edited before i could tell) and the hiar is fine I think. Simply Beautiful
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I've gone crazy how baout you? Tea? Coffee? Sugar? All of the above? |
02 February 2004 | |
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Frequenter
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Benito Nemesio
sometimes animation
Espana
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nice.
A wire?? Un saludo. |
02 February 2004 | |
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Frequenter
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Sang Han
Concept Artist
Firaxis
Baltimore,
USA
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Congrats on front page. I remember this project from WIP. You made some subtle changes but it makes a big difference. Good job.
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CG Human
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Mike Polizos
Motion Designer / 3D Generalist
Mindworks Digital Agency
Athens,
Greece
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Cool model and great textures man!
Also like her hair too! ![]() ![]() |
02 February 2004 | |
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Lord of the posts
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qwerty qwertyuiop
none
onen
Berlin,
Germany
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Extremely cool
![]() Saving for reference ![]() More angles plz.... Crits -- Tear glands and lower eyelashes are missing. May be they are there, but not noticable. A denser eyebrow will do... I'm not sure .... but ears should be visible, if you modelled it. ![]() ![]() |
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