Mosquito, Boris Martinek (3D)

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  02 February 2005
Mosquito, Boris Martinek (3D)

Title: Mosquito
Name: Boris Martinek
Country: Ukraine
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay

It was really intesting for me to create such a character as this mosquito robot. I had some photographs of real mosquitos to work with. Back ground I made in Photoshop. Please critique every part of this piece..
  02 February 2005
Boris, This is a beautifully assembled model! My only crits are the following:

1. There is almost too much detail in the mosquito's head area. I would like to see larger eyes and less "things going on" there. The details are so small that they get mixed-up with the legs behind the head which makes it hard to see the head.
2. Where are the wings?
3. It seems as though there should be some variation in the depth-of-field. You are only showing near and far, with nothing in between. I understand the focal range would be constricted if this were a micro-sized bot, but still, I think it needs better DOF.
4. My last crit, or suggestion, would be to make the "needle" or sucker part look more menacing, maybe even hinting at a hypodermic needle. If you could make it look as if it could extend and retract, that might be really cool.

You have done an awesome job on the textures and modelling though! Great work!

~ Annah
~ True to thyself, true to the world.
  02 February 2005
let me be the first to tell you that this is an exellent piece!

the background realy fits with the musquito and the textures are very nice.
You have some great skill at drawing!

The musquito is also great work. I like the blood containers on his back, and the "shell" if ya wish, is quite nice.

I'd say 5 stars for you!

<Edit> Lol, i posted only soon after the first reply, thats why i said "let me be the first to...." <end edit>
< And there he was! >

Last edited by Coltzero : 02 February 2005 at 05:07 PM.
  02 February 2005
Excellent work, dude! Ireally like the level of detalisation and your background
  02 February 2005
Thumbs up

Excellent work, dude! I really like the level of detalisation in model and your background!
Rspect, man
  02 February 2005
Amazing level of detail. M only crit is that maybe metal surfaces look a bit lkike plastic. Anyway great work!
  02 February 2005
very good concept
  02 February 2005
Thumbs up !

Excellent work, dude! Ireally like the level of detalisation, and the picture at all.
Respect for ya, man!
  02 February 2005
that is GREAT!
  02 February 2005
yeEAAARRRR !! excellent bug! ! great concept ,an animation perhaps
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