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  12 December 2004
the bodyguard

No special story so far ... I just wanted to practice my linework on the human body:
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  12 December 2004
step 2

Now I blocked the colors out any suggestions?
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  12 December 2004
I forgot to ask, what would be next wise? I have now all color-pieces in one layer, should I sketch the levels of depth or should I smoothly increase and decrease the colors with the burn and dodge tool?
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  12 December 2004
Well first off i see some problems with the perspective. Like the lamps grids dont work out okay. They give the perspective that we are at eye level with the lamps, which the rest of the images doesnt align up to. Also her right hand doesnt seem to be in contact with the spear... And finally i think you should work on the smoothness of the blade.. looks a bit uneven, and fuzzy ...

Apart from that i think you got the makings of a good image, i would just correct the perspective first since it really for me throws the image off, and then i would propably loose the fine lines. Or add some lineweight to the lineart. Even lines all over make for boring lineart...
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  01 January 2005
@Swoops: thanks at your advices. I corrected some things, but didn't stylize the lines yet. Comments are welcome.
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  01 January 2005
her left arm is bigger and longer than her right, also her right nipple seems a bit too high, or something, something is off with that breast at least...??? good work so far, like the new right hand much better.
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