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  11 November 2004
my first 3d head

hi all..
this is my first full head..or at least it is the most head that i got this far making it..well here it is and any c&c are most welcome..
thanx

and a wire frame


thanx
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  11 November 2004
oops post an old pic..
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  11 November 2004
looking good, just, his eyes look abit, em, odd, and the eyebrows shape also looks abit wierd for my taste. but other then that, looks good.
 
  11 November 2004
good start but i think the eyebrows look a bit too clean.. looks like women's eyebrows
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  11 November 2004
Freaky... I know someone who looks *exactly* like that near where I live. Looking good, and I bet your version doesn't smell as bad as the one I know
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  11 November 2004
Too much SSS on the nose, and the unshaven beard look should blend into hairless part more smoothly, with random hair here and there, and maybe less bump. Even tho you went for a comic style, the lobule of the ear would look better if bigger.

I liked the character, good job.
 
  11 November 2004
thanx for the comments guys..
I'm getting a real help here..

pHong: the eye brows are temporarily-is this spells right?? -..I can't get it right without me having a tablet. But I'm intending to try to make them with ornatrix..

mswehli: what you mean odd? maybe you mean they aren't clear enough? Well if this I will do a better sampling in the final render. if not plz. Let me know...

Black_Spider: weird!!!

hesido: you see I've cut the sss out already. in the older version it was more. But I'll bring it down a little ..
I'll post an update soon isa..thanx again
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  11 November 2004
here is un update..waiting for your comments..
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  11 November 2004
oh my god! it's prince charming from shrek 2! haha it sort of does look like him

lips are too red...why is there a grainy texture or reflection in the eyes?
 
  11 November 2004
I guess that could be a good thing..I may be working on shrek 3..don't worry hpslashluvr..I'll send you a free ticket ..

I'm working on adding hair to him right now..but I want to ask you all a question..I've changed the skin a little wich is better??or the two of them aint good??I don't know teel me your opinion and if you can point me to how can I improve it..please do..thank you all
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  11 November 2004
The facial hair is less bumpy now, that is good.

But it still dissolves into no-hair parts very abruptly.

We'd like to see him from different angles.
 
  11 November 2004
all right..now I nead help

I haven't had much time to work on him in the last couple of days..(I hope you didn't forget him)..so I'm back..
obviously the hair needs a little care, I'll work on that..and also I work on the dissolving hair issue-thanks hesido-but overall..I'm stuck, I need help..I'm using MAX and Brazil r/s..and I want to ask you guys..how can I make him look better..please any tips will be appreciated..
and I'm waiting also for your comments on this one..

and here is a screen showing the light setup for the guy..I'm using white cards and a QMC radiosity..and each of the white cards have a different lighting power.

thanx
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  12 December 2004
His Eyes are still a little misshapen. The need to taper less away form the nose.
 
  12 December 2004
another update and a question..
Do you notice that the specular in his eyes disapeared when I've used shag:hair??I don't understand why'd this happend..I use 2 spot light especially for hair,to cast hair shadows..
anybody know why??
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  12 December 2004
another view
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