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Old 04-22-2013, 06:25 AM   #1
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CG Portrait

I've been working on thsi protrait for a while and I feel it woudl be nice to get some feedback .

Zbrush, rendered on Max with Vray. Everything is a WIP.
Im handPainting the textures on Photoshop

I'm remodeling the shirt. And eventually Ill add hair to the guy.

Thanks,

Ignacio
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Old 04-22-2013, 01:24 PM   #2
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Hi ignanacho, nice work so far! The modelling looks great over all. I think the only place for improvement is with the textures. I think you could use some more reds, blues and greens, especially under the eyes to help make the skin look a little more translucent, some small veins would be nice to.

Over all I like it and expect the finished product to look pretty awesome!

Cheers
 
Old 04-22-2013, 10:00 PM   #3
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Thanks LeeSalo for the reply.

I agree with you. The texture right now doesnt have any variation. Ill try to start breaking the colors a bit this week and rendering some tests.
 
Old 08-14-2013, 04:29 PM   #4
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Hi This is my latest update. I changed the sss2 material to be not too strong. And I added some color variations.

Any feedback would be appreciated

Thanks

Ignacio
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Old 08-15-2013, 11:10 PM   #5
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The SSS does look more natural since your first render. I'm not an expert on these types of things, so I really can't offer any overall feedback. Here are a few of the small things that I first noticed when I looked at your render.

-The lips look fused together.
-I think there would be a thin layer of oil on the skin. It looks too diffuse now.
-The small details look too even and consistant. I think there are certain areas of the skin that are smoother than others.
-The folds look too even and smooth. They don't seem deep enough, and I don't see those dark shadows you would expect where the skin folds over itself.
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Old 08-16-2013, 12:11 AM   #6
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Thanks Aj1.

I agree with the sss looking much better.

Ill try to rework the lips. And the pores are too even. they are too strong on the forehead.

Maybe ill have to make the wrinkles deeper to get those shadows that u mentioned

Thanks again

Ignacio
 
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