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Old 01-23-2013, 10:05 PM   #1
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Hello!



I made this picture for the previous year's Vray anniversary challenge. Sorrily it was unfinished, so I'm planning to finish it.


Improved dof, fires on the candles, smoky atmosphere, improved cloth material and so on...

I would like to create something unconventional feeling.


Bigger version of picture: http://i.imgur.com/udbzWjX.jpg
 
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I think the central figure needs to be less central or static in pose. Also two side figures barely noticeable because they blend with the environment. Need lighting separation. The rest is good!
 
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Thx the comment! I will try to play with smoke and lights to highlight these chars.
 
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