Critique my work please :)

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  11 November 2013
Critique my work please :)

Hi guys this was a old dumpster bin i made at home one day
this was before I knew what normal maps was as a result i only used bump maps
Please feel free to critique my work thank you
I used Maya 2012 at the time!dumpsterbin/c20ri
  12 December 2013
Well done! The presentation is nice as well. It's very simple geo but it looks good, and the garbage bags are convincing. Only thing I'm not quite sure about is the lift points on the side - the geo looks a little strange (do those lift points actually have a flat base?). If you really want to go nuts, you could also add weld beads. The lift points could probably use some scratching up as well - truck drivers over the years probably would probably not be so precise as to get it in every time without dinging things up.

In fact, the only thing I would suggest adding is some paint scratches and maybe bevel the edges of the container a bit.
  12 December 2013
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