|06-14-2004, 05:42 AM||#4|
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Double Negative Visual Effects
Bradford On Avon, United Kingdom
Join Date: Apr 2004
Lovely sketches and interesting concept....
keep the WIPs coming as time is nearly over...great start and good luck with your entry
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|06-14-2004, 07:09 AM||#6|
Join Date: Jun 2004
Coloring WIP: Osiris
|06-14-2004, 05:34 PM||#8|
"lip smack, magic snack"portfolio
3D Previz Artist
Persistence of Vision
Los Angeles, USA
Join Date: Jan 2004
cool idea! I like the choice to try out the blue on the piece too but you migt play it down a little so it doesnt look too much like a transformer toy or something. Maybe cuz the background is blue too? Its just too lue right now but it is a good idea as a break from the norm with how egyptian outfits tend to be colored all gold and brown.
|06-14-2004, 09:19 PM||#11|
Concept Illustrator/ comic book artist
Video games/ Comic books
Whitley Bay, United Kingdom
Join Date: Mar 2004
It's a nice start, but maybe you could decide on an area you want the viewer to look at, and intensify that section with the hi-lights you have going on already. At the moment you have hi-lights on every element of your machinery.......not allowing the eye to rest in one place.
I think this piece has real potential if you diffused the light a little.
Just a thought
I'll come back to your thread Tomorrow, to give any last crit, on the build up to final submission. I'd appreciate any last crits on mine, also.
Much appreciated, and the best of luck!
|01-18-2006, 12:00 PM||#15|
Lord of the posts
Join Date: Sep 2003
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