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Old 06-14-2004, 02:36 AM   #1
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Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: dave lynch

dave lynch has entered the Machineflesh 2D Challenge.
 
Old 06-14-2004, 03:15 AM   #2
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WELCOME!!!

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Old 06-14-2004, 05:32 AM   #3
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Concept Sketch: Osiris



Egypt reimagined. Osiris has been forever locked in a pyrimid tomb in his new form of mummification.
 
Old 06-14-2004, 05:42 AM   #4
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Lovely sketches and interesting concept....

keep the WIPs coming as time is nearly over...great start and good luck with your entry
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Old 06-14-2004, 06:10 AM   #5
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Line Art: Osiris



after working on the some more ideas i finally came up with a vision i was happy with. kinda like a spider hanging down from his web.
 
Old 06-14-2004, 07:09 AM   #6
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I studied alot of Egpyptian art for color and how it should fit with the design and besides gold i thought blue would look great. at this point i'm still trying to figure out do i want to paint it loose or tight
 
Old 06-14-2004, 07:22 AM   #7
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Nice idea and very nice line work!

Good luck!


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Old 06-14-2004, 05:34 PM   #8
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cool idea! I like the choice to try out the blue on the piece too but you migt play it down a little so it doesnt look too much like a transformer toy or something. Maybe cuz the background is blue too? Its just too lue right now but it is a good idea as a break from the norm with how egyptian outfits tend to be colored all gold and brown.

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Old 06-14-2004, 07:40 PM   #9
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Great Tech!!! Lots of cool techy workings and cool shapes!
 
Old 06-14-2004, 08:23 PM   #10
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Old 06-14-2004, 09:19 PM   #11
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It's a nice start, but maybe you could decide on an area you want the viewer to look at, and intensify that section with the hi-lights you have going on already. At the moment you have hi-lights on every element of your machinery.......not allowing the eye to rest in one place.

I think this piece has real potential if you diffused the light a little.

Just a thought

I'll come back to your thread Tomorrow, to give any last crit, on the build up to final submission. I'd appreciate any last crits on mine, also.

Much appreciated, and the best of luck!

Paul



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Old 06-18-2004, 03:58 AM   #12
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Getting close to the deadline and still working hard. just a couple of more tweaks and i'll be finished.
 
Old 06-18-2004, 09:36 PM   #13
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Final Coloring: Osiris



Done at last
 
Old 06-18-2004, 11:49 PM   #14
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Thanks guys for the imput it really help me going in the right direction.
 
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