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Old 09-06-2013, 08:04 AM   #1
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Hi everyone, here are some recent work I just did. Thanks for stopping by!
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Old 09-07-2013, 04:45 AM   #2
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Awesome works dude!
 
Old 09-07-2013, 07:27 PM   #3
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Old 09-09-2013, 02:15 AM   #4
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Some nice work you have here.

The 4th one looks a bit awkward because the pieces of the structures seem to contradict each other in terms of perspective, and it's not easy to tell if it's intentional (lots of mismatched pieces wielded together haphazardly), or if you grabbed different pieces of photo with different perspective and put them together and thus they don't match. I'm assuming it's intentional, since you're a bit too advanced to make that kind of mistake. If it's intentional, then the problem is with readability, and readability problems are far more common among more advanced artists.

If you want it to look intentional, I suggest you have the various disparate pieces point in different directions more obviously, so there'e no mistaking that these structures are build in a haphazard manner.
 
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Thanks a lot Robert!

Yeah you are right, it was intentional but it really was not clear enough and ended up looking like an error instead. Still sort of new to using photo manipulative techniques, but slowly trying stuff out.
Thank you so much for the critique!
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