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Old 09-17-2004, 10:41 PM   #1
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The Grand And Wonderful Day, Seth Norman (2D)



Title: The Grand And Wonderful Day
Name: Seth Norman
Country: Canada
Software: Photoshop

This is some thing i was working on. This project was just for fun to learn different technics, and how i could go simple but yet, make it look good! I would appricate some crits on how i could make this better and how i can inprove thanks. I have been working on this image for a week just on and off so probley around four to five hours.

To see the progress of the painting, and how i work check out the links below.
http://www.seth-norman.com/winnie_pooh.jpg
http://www.seth-norman.com/winnie_pooh2.jpg
http://www.seth-norman.com/winnie_pooh3.jpg
http://www.seth-norman.com/winnie_pooh4.jpg
http://www.seth-norman.com/winnie_pooh5.jpg
http://www.seth-norman.com/winnie_pooh6.jpg
http://www.seth-norman.com/winnie_pooh7.jpg
http://www.seth-norman.com/winnie_pooh8.jpg
http://www.seth-norman.com/winnie_pooh9.jpg
 
Old 09-17-2004, 11:13 PM   #2
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good beginning,... keep working!
 
Old 09-19-2004, 04:41 AM   #3
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Remind me about my childhood ^^
There's something wrong with the propotion and such, but well done ^^
 
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It's very nice. I think though, that it could benefit from some tonal variation, particularly in the area of the grass.
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Old 09-19-2004, 07:11 PM   #5
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Josť Garcia R.: Thank you ill see what i can do to it..

Zhou: lol thats cool. Yeah the proportions are messed is stomache to big and his nose and face colud be fixed. I drew this in Paintchat with mouse.

Modron: What do you mean by that, like a darker green, or a different green all around? Thanks for your suggestion ill play around with it when i get home!
 
Old 09-20-2004, 07:12 AM   #6
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yes, if you look at a field of grass, other than on a golf course, or someones manicured lawn, you'll notice some parts are thicker and greener, and other parts are a bit yellowish and dried out.
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Old 09-20-2004, 11:59 PM   #7
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Ok, thanks for the tip Ill see what i can do, I remember it for next time i paint grass or somethign like this..
 
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