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Old 05-03-2013, 06:50 PM   #1
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Walk animation

https://vimeo.com/65401825

I'm submitting this animation as a student, and looking forward to receive critiques from the animators that have also being in my position and can tell if I am on the right track.
I'm going to graduate in about one year. This animation was just a simple 10 steps walk with personality.
All kinds of critiques are more than welcome.

Thanks!
 
Old 05-05-2013, 01:49 AM   #2
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If the guy is tired he will be trying to walk using the least amount of energy,
So try and tone down the shoulders and neck rotations and add a bit to the head rotation (forwards to help with overlap)
Also give the hips more sideways motion.

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Old 05-06-2013, 02:32 AM   #3
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Thanks YashaP

That's the same thing I though after watch a few more times, he using too much energy in his shoulders, what seems a bit weird if he is really tired.
The head was a thing that I was having a bit of trouble to get it right, but I think that adding rotation in to it would definitely make it look better.
 
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