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Old 05-17-2006, 08:25 PM   #16
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hi payam
awsome
thats realy fantastic
the turtles is fantastic
good feeling
need more work on composit
and dont forget about post working in photoshop

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Old 05-20-2006, 09:53 AM   #17
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Final Image : The Journey Begin



Mr. Turtle begin the journey .donít forget Mr. Elephant useful help ;)
 
Old 05-20-2006, 10:05 AM   #18
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Hahaha! The turtle is so funny!

I can really imagine that crazy "Inventor-turtle" trying to prove
to the world that he can fly - free as the birds. I'm nuts about your idea.

and now for the crits (albeit a bit late):

- The background is out of place, both colorwise and detail wise
(yes - even if DOF / blurred). It looks like it's hand-dabbed with
a wacom pen ..quickly, while the turtle looks really cool and detailed.

- The turtle neck look too "square", needs to be a bit more roundish
- The wings needs some more "detailing" to them, scratches! Like
he has tried this a "few-times...he he". Eventually some tears'n'ripps.

- The rock texture looks flat and odd, maybe you could "model" the
rock so it doesn't look like a flat texture slapped onto a simple mesh?

But again - I really LIKE your idea and if you worked the image over
(yeah - there's still time...I'm pretty late on my submission too)
you could do wonders on this.

Hope I wasn't being too harsh, I'm honest and straightforward.
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Old 05-20-2006, 10:21 AM   #19
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I like your idea...
It would be better if you spent more time on your modeling.
Good luck guy.
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Thank you SketchPad & living_for_cg for your kind replyís ,

I really like to work more on my idea but as you know I have not enough time. may be after challenge I complete it with more details
 
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Final Image : final image update



final image update
 
Old 05-21-2006, 08:35 AM   #22
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wow payam
thats nice
i smell an award!!!

STAR WARS!!!
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Old 05-21-2006, 05:02 PM   #23
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Talking thank you my Friend Alshakno ;)

hi Alshakno,
thank you for your reply.
award !?? ))
 
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