|05 May 2006||#16|
Mohammad Ali Shakeri
Join Date: Sep 2005
thats realy fantastic
the turtles is fantastic
need more work on composit
and dont forget about post working in photoshop
|05 May 2006||#18|
Join Date: Aug 2002
Hahaha! The turtle is so funny!
I can really imagine that crazy "Inventor-turtle" trying to prove
to the world that he can fly - free as the birds. I'm nuts about your idea.
and now for the crits (albeit a bit late):
- The background is out of place, both colorwise and detail wise
(yes - even if DOF / blurred). It looks like it's hand-dabbed with
a wacom pen ..quickly, while the turtle looks really cool and detailed.
- The turtle neck look too "square", needs to be a bit more roundish
- The wings needs some more "detailing" to them, scratches! Like
he has tried this a "few-times...he he". Eventually some tears'n'ripps.
- The rock texture looks flat and odd, maybe you could "model" the
rock so it doesn't look like a flat texture slapped onto a simple mesh?
But again - I really LIKE your idea and if you worked the image over
(yeah - there's still time...I'm pretty late on my submission too)
you could do wonders on this.
Hope I wasn't being too harsh, I'm honest and straightforward.
|05 May 2006||#20|
thank you friends
Thank you SketchPad & living_for_cg for your kind replyís ,
I really like to work more on my idea but as you know I have not enough time. may be after challenge I complete it with more details
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