The Journey Begins Challenge (3D) Entry: Payam Najafizadeh

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  05 May 2006
hi payam
thats realy fantastic
the turtles is fantastic
good feeling
need more work on composit
and dont forget about post working in photoshop

  05 May 2006
Final Image : The Journey Begin

Mr. Turtle begin the journey .donít forget Mr. Elephant useful help ;)
  05 May 2006
Hahaha! The turtle is so funny!

I can really imagine that crazy "Inventor-turtle" trying to prove
to the world that he can fly - free as the birds. I'm nuts about your idea.

and now for the crits (albeit a bit late):

- The background is out of place, both colorwise and detail wise
(yes - even if DOF / blurred). It looks like it's hand-dabbed with
a wacom pen ..quickly, while the turtle looks really cool and detailed.

- The turtle neck look too "square", needs to be a bit more roundish
- The wings needs some more "detailing" to them, scratches! Like
he has tried this a "few-times...he he". Eventually some tears'n'ripps.

- The rock texture looks flat and odd, maybe you could "model" the
rock so it doesn't look like a flat texture slapped onto a simple mesh?

But again - I really LIKE your idea and if you worked the image over
(yeah - there's still time...I'm pretty late on my submission too)
you could do wonders on this.

Hope I wasn't being too harsh, I'm honest and straightforward.
  05 May 2006

I like your idea...
It would be better if you spent more time on your modeling.
Good luck guy.
Available for freelance
  05 May 2006
thank you friends

Thank you SketchPad & living_for_cg for your kind replyís ,

I really like to work more on my idea but as you know I have not enough time. may be after challenge I complete it with more details
  05 May 2006
Final Image : final image update

final image update
  05 May 2006
wow payam
thats nice
i smell an award!!!

  05 May 2006
Talking thank you my Friend Alshakno ;)

hi Alshakno,
thank you for your reply.
award !?? ))
  05 May 2006
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