|12-10-2013, 05:41 PM||#1|
London, United Kingdom
Join Date: May 2012
this is a current animation I'm working on and I need feed back as I am new to this. any feedback will be deeply appreciated. link below.
thanks in advance and God bless
|12-10-2013, 07:03 PM||#2|
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Animation Mentor Student
San Juan, Puerto Rico
Join Date: Mar 2003
Nice work so far. My main recommendation is to reblock the animation and work more in the poses and the timing. There is twining (too much symmetry) in the shot with the hands on the table, try to make it a little more asymmetry between the right and left side. Also try to work on the animation curves.
The Animator Survival Kit is a great book to start learning animation.
|12-10-2013, 07:03 PM||#3|
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