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Old 03-06-2013, 07:13 PM   #16
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Is this giant from a movie? I seem to remember the shape from a movie i watched several times in my childhood .

very nice start for the hangar render. Few suggestions though.

- Make the hangar FAR more dirty (dirty textures, more random props)
- Adjust the lightning so the point of focus is the gaint himself. Right now if you look at the image, the giant isn't the eyecatcher. You should place a directional light, so the light coming through the gate will illuminate him. Make dirty windows/something like that for the other holes. Right now they demand too much attention.
- Adjust the composition: place the barrels out of the center of the image (more to the left)

Already love the scene. You did a lovely job on the texturing!
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Old 03-07-2013, 10:09 AM   #17
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thank you very much for your point of view zenopelgrins.yes is the giant of the movie from your childhood.I will try to do everything that you offer me and when I have done the work I will share with you.
 
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some more progress

 
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more progress on texturing

 
Old 03-18-2013, 03:09 PM   #20
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another render

 
Old 03-18-2013, 03:36 PM   #21
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Geeat lighting adjustment. Avoid placing the object of interest in the middle though. Also, i'd zoom in a bit more
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Something like that zenopelgrims??

 
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already better, now place the point of interest (the giant) out of the middle.
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Old 03-18-2013, 06:52 PM   #24
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I feel bringing back a tad bit more of the colour in the Giant might not be a bad idea. The only real colour I see that draws my attention is on the graffiti.
 
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i agree, try to place your character off center..
you can experiment added foreground elements to aid your composition, just a suggestion!
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