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  10 October 2011
Short Film - After You _Trailer

Hello I have been working on a short films for a few month now would love to hear your thoughts about it ... "the good and the bad"


60 years in the life of a Dublin Doorman
http://vimeo.com/30572161
Thank you
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  10 October 2011
i like it very much & i like it the render
 
  10 October 2011
Nice quality to the lighting and rendering. Good consistent look.

The trailer was a little hard to follow, there were a lot of jumpy cuts that happened pretty quick and seemed like they covered a bunch of unrelated scenes. I guess what I mean is if you hadn't told me it was the 60 year life of a door man in the comments I never would have gathered that from the trailer. I understand you were kind of timing the cuts to the upbeat music, but due to the sort of generic looking faces on the characters, sometimes (because of the quick cuts) it was hard to know who you were looking at. For example, was that some other character, or the doorman in a different outfit, or the doorman when hes older? Hard to tell sometimes.

Anyway, I'm sure the actual short is much easier to understand, and just wanted to give some feedback on the trailer. I wish you good luck with it.
 
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