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Old 03-28-2013, 07:55 PM   #1
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Based on all the images I have above, how can I improve this model? It's for a computer animation II class I'm currently in.
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Old 03-28-2013, 09:33 PM   #2
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A few things needs fixing

I would get rid of the boobs they just dont look right and also sort out the forearms they look to fat as do the feet and do you need a vagina on this model ?? its just that it looks a bit odd .. anyway I think if you sort out those parts the model will look a lot better
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do you need a vagina on this model ?? its just that it looks a bit odd ..


Especially when it's located extremely incorrectly.....

I agree, there is absolutely no need for it, or the breasts. They look ridiculous.
 
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I would get rid of the boobs


I can't. I want the alien to be a female.
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Alien porn anyone....
 
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well I can tell you one thing for sure your model will never look female just because you stuck those parts on it the way you have , get rid of them and work on making the head/face more female looking thats what counts, a pair of tits and muff stuck on like that will never work .. good luck and keep at it dude
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well I can tell you one thing for sure your model will never look female just because you stuck those parts on it the way you have , get rid of them and work on making the head/face more female looking thats what counts, a pair of tits and muff stuck on like that will never work .. good luck and keep at it dude


Thanks for the advice.
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Alien porn anyone....

LOL. I should model a male alien and then make myself an alien porno.
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This is the final version of the alien. I hope everyone likes it.
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