CGTalk > Gallery > Featured 3D
Login register
Thread Closed share thread « Previous Thread | Next Thread »  
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 08-09-2004, 03:25 PM   #1
mill
Veteran
Mill
Japan
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 66
Mr.bean, Mill (3D)



Title: Mr.bean
Name: Mill
Country: Japan
Software: Maya, Zbrush, Photoshop

Hi.
This is my personal work.
I modeled this in Maya, made a texture and bump maps in Zbrush and rendered in Mental Ray.
The back ground is not 3D.

It would be great if you could give me some feedback on this model so that I can make a better one for the next time.

Thank you in advance.
 
Old 08-09-2004, 10:43 PM   #2
Kanga
KillaRoo
 
Kanga's Avatar
portfolio
Chris Kautz
Freelancer/Character artist.
Netherlands
 
Join Date: Feb 2004
Posts: 9,566
Send a message via ICQ to Kanga Send a message via MSN to Kanga
Hi Mill!
Looks pretty damn good!

There are a couple of small things that might make it look a little better though:
The eyes look a little painted on. I think they need more depth.
The hairline looks crosshatched and not like a real hailine.
The highlight on the left of the head (his right) is a bit bumpy and plastic.
The jacket is a bit puppetlike and not really full.
The outline should be blurred just a little to stop that cutout effect.

Like I said pretty nice work, looking forward to seeing more from you.

Greetings Kanga
__________________
The terminal velocity of individual particles is directly related to pink rabbits on a bank holiday.
Characters, Games, Toys
 
Old 08-10-2004, 08:43 AM   #3
Dr. Ira Kane
Wild One
 
Dr. Ira Kane's Avatar
Doctorus Ira Kane
Antarctica
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Posts: 654
That's look great man, sure it's more like painting than rendering but looks great anyway, i like mr.bean a lot so my only crit is the lips looks unfamiliar to me, the rest is 100% bean :P
__________________
Don't tell me what I can't do!
 
Old 08-10-2004, 09:29 AM   #4
ejholmes
Veteran
 
ejholmes's Avatar
Eric Holmes
Usa
 
Join Date: Aug 2004
Posts: 35
Very cool, lol! only crit would be that his eyes should be slightly larger and i think his face is a little to wide; making him look more muscular than he really is. But great model! i love it!
__________________
MeshSmooth? What MeshSmooth?
 
Old 08-10-2004, 09:41 AM   #5
Flee Elf
New Member
 
Join Date: May 2004
Posts: 13
Very good likeness, well done.

I agree with most of what kanga said, but the eyes I think are more that you need to put in eyelashes rather than trying to give more depth.
 
Old 08-10-2004, 10:15 AM   #6
pearl3d
Visual Artist
 
pearl3d's Avatar
portfolio
Lampros Kalfuntzos
Digital Artist
Reading, United Kingdom
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Posts: 397
very nice work......


coolllllllllll
__________________
Portfolio Facebook
 
Old 08-10-2004, 11:37 AM   #7
Markski
Up and at Them
 
Markski's Avatar
portfolio
Mark K
Freelance
Canada
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Posts: 343
LOL! very nice!
 
Old 08-10-2004, 04:17 PM   #8
xjgd4321
New Member
 
xjgd4321's Avatar
portfolio
Jian Xu
Shanghai, China
 
Join Date: May 2003
Posts: 404

very good job!
The character is very lively ,especially his mouth.
but I think his face should be more round.
 
Old 08-12-2004, 02:55 PM   #9
mill
Veteran
Mill
Japan
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 66
Hi.
Thank you for your comments.

Here is the color map without shading and the Zbrush model from which the bump map was generated.




I am going to update the Bean image soon.
Thanks.
 
Old 08-13-2004, 12:25 PM   #10
Ufu'uk
Registered User
 
Join Date: Aug 2004
Posts: 11
Model looks good....hmmm. very good
 
Old 08-13-2004, 01:54 PM   #11
mill
Veteran
Mill
Japan
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 66
Hi.
These are the test renders from the different angle.
That's not the final model but very close.



Here is the update.
Thank you for all the comments.
Now I can move on to the next model.

 
Old 08-13-2004, 01:58 PM   #12
dcmoutinho
I never give up !
 
dcmoutinho's Avatar
portfolio
Daniel Cavalcante Moutinho
Character Animator
Start - Animation Studios
Sao Paulo, Brazil
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 639
Send a message via MSN to dcmoutinho
very nice !
the image reminds Bean
__________________
Daniel Cavalcante
characeter animator
http://blog.danielcavalcante.com
 
Old 08-13-2004, 02:02 PM   #13
mushroomgod
marzipan...its great!!
 
mushroomgod's Avatar
portfolio
Matthew Dartford
illustrator and lazy git
MDI Digital
Norwich, United Kingdom
 
Join Date: Apr 2002
Posts: 1,926
Send a message via MSN to mushroomgod

I dont think it looks like MR Bean......but, it does look very good all the same
__________________
Monsters! Monsters from the id!

Flickr

MDI Digital
 
Old 08-15-2004, 12:35 PM   #14
mill
Veteran
Mill
Japan
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 66
Thank you for the comments.

Yes. I admit it does not exactly look Mr.Bean.
Problems are
1. It's very different between the modeling view and the render view.
2. Everyone knows Mr.Bean.
3. My drawing skill.

I hope the next model will be better.

Thank you again.
 
Old 01-18-2006, 10:00 PM   #15
CGTalk Moderation
Lord of the posts
CGTalk Forum Leader
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 1,066,481
Thread automatically closed

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.
__________________
CGTalk Policy/Legalities
Note that as CGTalk Members, you agree to the terms and conditions of using this website.
 
Thread Closed share thread


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
CGSociety
Society of Digital Artists
www.cgsociety.org

Powered by vBulletin
Copyright 2000 - 2006,
Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Minimize Ads
Forum Jump
Miscellaneous

All times are GMT. The time now is 01:17 AM.


Powered by vBulletin
Copyright ©2000 - 2016, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.