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Old 06-14-2013, 12:13 AM   #1
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Hey,

I think I'm at a stage for some critique on my animation. I'm not really sure I thought it through properly as I dived straight into it. I really liked the dialogue which inspired me to dress up the malcolm rig as a super hero (kinda fits). I'm at that point again where I'm saying to myself "that'll do" but I'm interested to hear what people say about it to hopefully learn something.

Thanks and enjoy..

https://vimeo.com/68280569

Craig.
 
Old 06-15-2013, 12:43 AM   #2
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Hi Craig!
The shot looks great, and i really like the girls facial expressions.
You need to have a look at the hips and body and make sure they dont hit a wall when the guy stops walking.

Hope that helps
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Old 06-16-2013, 10:23 AM   #3
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Thanks Yasha! I've taken another look at the hips and COG. I've tried to smooth it out slightly when he stops. I think I might have to redo the cloth dynamics on the cape though as I've left it the same, now it moves a little too much on that last step. Thanks for your help though!
 
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