Hope Springs Eternal Rev, Jose Pardo (2D)

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  09 September 2004
Thanks Again!

To all,

I replied privately to some but I dont want the rest to think I dont appreciate your comments any less. I am really pleasantly surprised at the quality and thought placed into your feed back. I truly appreciate it and am inspired by it.

Thank You!

Jose
 
  09 September 2004
Woa! Really really nice. Perhaps I should read all the other comments, but its so many, so I'll write my constructive critique shortly anyway.
First of all: Her upperarms has got a bit too big muscles, and her face reminds me abit about a mans face. (only when I look closely....)
last of all: the outline on her wings culd maybe be abit less visible?
I had to look very close at this to find my critique, so theyre not like very visible things...
Oh, and a tiny question, how big is this? (in pixels)
Keep it up!!
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  09 September 2004
Professional

Great Clouds !!!

Did You Realy Have A Live Model ?

Has A Nice Clean Professional Look to it!
 
  09 September 2004
Thanks, I am on the fence about her musculature, it seems some mind it, some dont. I will probably tone it down a bit. The wings were commented on with good cause. They were the last thing I rendered at about 2 am on a work night, I should know better. I will redo her wings.

Jose
 
  09 September 2004
Professional

Great Clouds !!!

Did You Realy Have A Live Model ?

Has A Nice Clean Professional Look to it!
 
  09 September 2004
the colour of her wing are superb. lovely super mario bros mushroom.

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  09 September 2004
this is really stunning. I dont have a single bad thing to say...it's great.
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  09 September 2004
cool painting...great jop
congrats
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  09 September 2004
Thanks for the fine airbrushing and coloring! really great work!
I would move the overall cloud towars top left to give a darker BG to the fairy. (this is my personal view)
 
  10 October 2004
hi

i just checked out the updated image u've posted... u've been very successful in making her musculature more feminine. She's looking really pretty.Congrats! (Although i do miss her elf-like ears)

ummm...i'm not really sure about the wings... their color tones kinda blend into the image, the previous color schemes of the wings lent more life to the image , it was more exotic and more exciting... i'm not really sure. But I personally liked the previous colors of the wings.

great update...

regards
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  10 October 2004
Yeah, the wings are still a problem. I like them better more transparent, I just have to remember for next time to put something other than white clouds behind her, so you can see the transparency.

The ears! I will put some ears in!

Thanks again!

Jose
 
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